Hi Poppy,Good work on this powerpoint. Some points for improvement:-Make the layout and use of space better on each slide. Most have a big grey area on the bottom left side, left empty. -Even though for many roles the pay is variable please you could find one example of pay or two brackets of varied payments. -Try and include some more of the responsibilities of those in those roles. Thanks,Josh
Hi Poppy,
ReplyDeleteGood work on this powerpoint.
Some points for improvement:
-Make the layout and use of space better on each slide. Most have a big grey area on the bottom left side, left empty.
-Even though for many roles the pay is variable please you could find one example of pay or two brackets of varied payments.
-Try and include some more of the responsibilities of those in those roles.
Thanks,
Josh